Criticism needed on resume and cover letter

[modernwizard]

Will pay!

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[ship2shore.livejournal.com]

I will do it for free.

Or I can send you a copy of mine and you can check it out to compare.

Warning: I don't typically use an objective section. But there's a ton of contention about that part of the resume anyways.

[melopoeia.livejournal.com]

you can pay me in company, not money. Maybe we could rewatch a movie.